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Strolling in the shadow of dusky light
Orange hue above a beautiful sight
People in watching, all quiet alone
Afraid of no warning or gentle atone
Balmy breeze of autumn fading away
waves gushing across the shore
The mighty sun drowning in the ocean
As young heads play with sparkling water
The old ones sit and watchthe palm trees that bend over beautifully
Whispering grass, musty and sweet.
Fragrance of flowers, odors of peat
Shimmering gold from the trees
In the evening sunset, close of the day
A wise owl that hoots, has nothing to say
Peaceful and tranquil now hazing away
Such wonderful sights to end a day.
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beautiful...the images you've left behind is fascinating!All the best...
ReplyDelete@panchali- thanks a lot for the compliments and wishes. :) Keep reading :)
ReplyDeleteA simple and nice poem Harshal :)
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT
P:s - you missed a 'y' in a mighty sun
very well written :)
ReplyDeletebest wishes for BAT
@menachery- Thanks a lot for the wishes. :)
ReplyDeleteand yeah. that was a typo. It shall be corrected son.
@karan- thanks. :)
good
ReplyDeleteThanks avik .:)
ReplyDeleteNice play of words. Well written, leads to a very soothing visualization! ATB for BAT!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Harshal.. it brings out images, yes. But it'd have been so much better, if you had kept the rhyme in the second verse too. The rhythm that one gets when reading out the first verse, is lost in the second..
ReplyDelete(P.S: Typo still there, and typo in your reply to Menachery too. Shouldn't it be "soon"? ;) )
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@Leo- Thanks a lot for the compliments. And regarding the typos, I guess I just need to look more at my keyboard while typing.
ReplyDeleteThanks again for the input and coming by.
@Deepa- THanks a lot for the wishes as well as the compliments.
Peaceful and tranquil indeed are your words too!!
ReplyDeleteHey - very nice poem. More importantly, easy to understand. Had a very smooth read. One go without recap :)
ReplyDeletenice poem and good luck for BAT :)
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery!
ReplyDeletesweet poem! :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best !
@manasa- Thanks :)
ReplyDelete@neha- Thanks a lot for the wishes. :)
@jaish_vats- Thank you
@Ashzzes- Thanks for the wishes. :)
Beautiful poem Harshal!! Somehow, I felt missing rhyme in the second paragraph changed the mood of readers... All the best.. Keep writing..
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Thank you SiS. :)
DeleteYeah, I felt the missing rhyme too. Anyway, will try harder next time. :)