Tuesday, June 5, 2012

memories..!!


The memories that you've left behind,
The memories that tend to swell up my mind,
The memories that invade my heart,
The memories that you've left behind,
The memories that make me smile
are the ones that also make me cry
In times of despair, those are the ones that remind me how far I've come.
and describe the dreadful journey of mine.

Sometimes, the pain is unbearable,
and the world unacceptable.

The way you treated me
The way you broke my heart
Into a million pieces,
left me to gather the pieces.
The broken pieces of my heart
shall never be able to love again.

Now, I am standing here without you.
Thinking of all the ways to avoid the pain seething through me,

I've been wrong.
I've been down,
into the bottom of every bottle.

I cared for you,
gave you all the love I had,
spent sleepless nights for you,
and this is how you repay me.
By walking away.





15 comments:

  1. wonderful attempt , nicely written intense first poem..good job buddy!!!
    http://yuvaindianwriter.blogspot.in/

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  2. @animesh- thanks a ton. I had to start somewhere. :)

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  3. Harshal!! This is awesome! It's short and sweet. Initially I thought it was about your high school like coming to an end, but the theme unfolded as I read along. Good job! :)

    - Nikita

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  4. @xtacie a.k.a nikita-thanks a lot for going through it. :) I am gald you liked it.

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  5. @roopiKA-THANKS :) GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

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  6. first time ?? its a beautiful weave of words !

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  7. @alka-yeah. tried my hand at poetry for the first time. Thank you soo much for liking it and complementing it. :)

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  8. Hey great effort...really commendable...keep going n give us more of such work...

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  9. Have u undergone such experience?? apropos Laudable work :)

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  10. @priyam di-nhi. havent gone under such experience. bas ainvayi likh dia. thank you for liking it :)

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  11. Have u undergone such experience?? apropos Laudable work :)

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  12. my very first blog post has this very image..so i was drawn to it to see what u had written!
    and ofcourse broken heart image hai toh theme toh same rahega..albeit mine was a story urs a poem! well written!

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